BY JAN HAAG
NOTICE: PLAGIARISM ON AOL POETRY BOARDS
My name is Jan Haag. My website is janhaag.com. Among other works,
janhaag.com includes many poems I have written in the last thirty years.
The website is titled "By Jan Haag," and was initially posted on November
9, 1996. Every page in every section is copyrighted. Every quotation and
reference to the works of others is properly cited.
I post my poetry on the Internet because I believe the Internet is the
greatest medium ever invented for poets, and for making poetry available
to a vast world wide audience of poetry readers and poetry lovers.
However, it has the disadvantage of being vulnerable to the unscrupulous
-- especially those unwilling or unable to write works of their own and
who, therefore, plagiarize the works of others.
One or more plagiarizers using the names NorthStar1007, Susanna, Baie, Baie
d'Ange, Frederick, Fred, FTeregul, and possibly people using other code
names or pseudonyms, have stolen at least a hundred poems from janhaag.com
and posted the stolen poems on AOL Writers Club, Poetry Boards, I, II, III,
the Edge of the Universe, Coffee Shop, Sassy's Coffee Shop, signing the
poems with a variety of the names mentioned above -- most often using the
name "Susanna."
Be assured, I never gave my permission to anyone at anytime to repost any
of my work anywhere using any name other than my own: Jan Haag.
In addition to the willful, intentional and ongoing plagiarizing of
my work, NorthStar1007, Susanna, Baie, Baie d'Ange, Frederick, Fred,
FTeregul, as well as those signing themselves as Jon
(TheHBKid187@aol.com), and Peter Stone (Paris REVIEW@aol.com) and
possibly people using other code names and pseudonyms, have
plagiarized the works of Nazim Hikmet, Fyodor Tyutchev, Ian
Lancashire, Nihat Ziyalan, Yasar Kemal, Ataol Behramoglu, and
possibly other poets.
To help stop these plagiarists and to rectify the misuse of my work which
they posted without permission and without proper credit on AOL Boards,
AlwaysLisa@aol.com, a member of AOL will repost, with my permission and
proper credit, the poems plagiarized by NorthStar1007 et al.
NOTE: EVERY POET, EVERY CONTRIBUTOR, EVERY READER OF AOL BOARDS CAN
HELP STOP PLAGIARISM!
To check any poem one suspects of being plagiarized: "Search" the NET for
any line from the poem -- enclose the line in quotes. (I use Google.com)
The website where the line is found will be called up. Use "find" within
the website to locate the particular line/poem. When you discover a poem
has been plagiarized, notify Tracey, the Writers Club Board Monitor at
THopeB@aol.com (she seems to be the most responsive) as well as AOL's
Legal and Terms of Service Departments.
ABOVE ALL, NOTIFY THE AUTHOR.
(Note: This "search" technique does not work in reverse. The poems posted
on AOL's Poetry Boards do not come up in a "search" via Google or via any
other regular search engine.)
I was first notified by HEBAnnie@aol.com on August 17, 2001 of the
extensive plagiarizing of my poetry by NorthStar1007 et al from
janhaag.com and its reposting on AOL Boards with fraudulent signatures.
On September 1, 2001, Tracey of AOL informed me: "When it was called
to my attention that some of the postings in the "Coffee Shop" folder
on the Poetry I message board in the Writers Club were copied from
your website, I removed them (6/18/01), and sent them to AOL's Terms
of Service department. To be on the safe side, a couple of weeks
ago, I also removed *any* poetry from that AOL member in the "Coffee
Shop" folder."
Note: Because I did not hear of the plagiarizing until 8/17/01, I do
not know whether or not the following one-hundred-sixteen (116)
poems, here reposted with my permission, include those taken down on
6/18/01, or if, indeed, there were many more poems plagiarized and
posted before that date. Beginning on 8/17/01 I have some 600 pages
of emails, documenting the plagiarizing, and the fact that though AOL
was repeatedly informed, they did nothing more about removing the
plagiarized poems after 6/18/01 until 9/06/01.
On September 6, 2001, Tracey of AOL informed me: "I've gone through
every folder on the Poetry I message board in the Writers Club, from
January 1, 2001, and did find one poem that I had missed earlier.
That is now removed."
When I objected and said I had been informed that there were still some of
my poems posted on AOL Boards by the plagiarizers, NorthStar1007 et al,
she checked again, and...
Later on September 6, 2001, Tracey of AOL informed me: "You're right; I
hadn't realized that this AOL member had posted on the Poetry II message
board as well as Poetry I. I've gone through every folder on the Poetry
II and Poetry III message boards, and made sure that any postings by that
AOL member that contained poetry were removed."
The entity referred to in the above 9/01/01 and 9/06/01 e-mails as "that
AOL member" is NorthStar1007, Susanna, Baie, Baie d'Ange, Frederick, Fred,
FTeregul. I assume that when she says that all postings "...that contained
Poetry were removed," this includes not only my poetry, but all the other
postings that NorthStar et al plagiarized from other poets.
If you see any posting by any of the NorthStar et al names, check
them out by "searching" the lines of the poems. If a poem posted on
AOL has been plagiarized get in touch with the original author,
notify AOL, notify Tracey.
"AOL Anywhere Terms and Conditions of Use" contract posted at
http://www.aol.com/copyright.html and "Rules of User Conduct"
http://www.aol.com/copyright/rules.html strictly and specifically forbids
copyright infringement. Therefore, under AOL's Terms of Service, I assume
AOL has barred NorthStar1007 et al and the actual user(s) these names
represent from any further use of AOL.
Along with my DMCA Complaint Notice sent to AOL, I suggested as
partial remedy for my website having been so extensively plagiarized,
that AOL repost each of the poems on the same Poetry Boards over my
signature and copyright notice where the plagiarized poems had been
posted by NorthStar1007 et al.
So far, I have had no word from AOL's Legal or Terms of Service
Departments. However, on September 1, 2001, Tracey sent an email
saying: "You're more than welcome to post your work on our Poetry
boards, with any appropriate copyright and authorship notices."
Therefore, AlwaysLisa@aol.com will begin today, with my permission,
to repost the one-hundred-sixteen (116) poems plagiarized by
NorthStar1007 et al, and brought to my attention by AOL users.
There may have been more which, as mentioned above, were
removed by Tracey as of 6/18/01.
When this reposting is completed, a page will be available on my
website, janhaag.com, which will include more extensive
documentation, my DMCA Complaint Notice and AOL's Legal and Terms of
Service responses, as well as documentation about the still on-going
plagiarism from the works of other poets. The URL for that page will
be posted at the end of these one-hundred-sixteen (116) reposted
poems.
I offer many thanks to AlwaysLisa@aol.com, SyrenaVars@aol.com and
HEBAnnie@aol.com, the poets and Poetry Board contributors who have helped
me to identify the plagiarizers, and the poems that were plagiarized, and
bring this unconscionable copyright infringement to AOL's attention. The
on-going dedication and work of these three women is a gift to every poet.
Jan Haag
janhaag.com
September 21, 2001
The Collected Works of Jan Haag are posted on her website,
janhaag.com. The poetry section beings at
http://janhaag.com/POpoetry.html. This opening page fully indexes all
Collections and individual poems By Jan Haag.
[Note: For when and where each of the poems plagiarized from my website
-- and from the websites of at least ten other poets -- were posted on
AOL, consult this documentation.
Most of the poems plagiarized by NorthStar1007, Susanna, Baie, Baie
d'Ange, Frederick, Fred, FTeregul (henceforth referred to as NS et al
or NS) were copied verbatim from my collection titled: The
Desolation Poems/POETIC FORMS USED IN ENGLISH, which begins at
http://janhaag.com/PODesIntro.html on my website which bears my
initial signature and title: "By Jan Haag."
At least one-hundred-four (104) poems were plagiarized from this
collection by NS et al and posted under NS's subject title "English Poetry
Forms" on AOL Poetry Boards with fraudulent signatures -- usually
"Susanna". However, occasionally the poems are signed with other names
from the NS et al cluster.
For the most part, each of my "Forms" poems is titled with the form's
traditional name. Nonetheless, many of my actual titles were altered
and person's names within poems have been changed. Also, many of
these poems as posted by NS et al used definitions as epigraphs.
These are not my epigraphs and were never meant to accompany the
poems.
Indeed, some of these definitions, as well as several of the "form"
poems NS posted, were plagiarized from Ian Lancashire's Poetry
website at http://www.library.utoronto.ca/utel/rp/terminology.html.
Other of NS's definitions may or may not have been plagiarized from
other sources.
In addition to the poems themselves, NS also appropriated sections,
verbatim, from my Introduction to The Desolation Poems/POETIC FORMS
USED IN ENGLISH, http://janhaag.com/PODesIntro.html.
With the help of AlwaysLisa@aol.com, that Introduction is reposted
here in full:
(NOTE: I have CAPITALIZED the specific statements stolen by the
plagiarizer NS et al. Having plagiarized these statments, NS posted them
on AOL's Poetry Board and signed them with the name "Susanna.")
By Jan Haag
The Desolation Poems/POETIC FORMS USED IN ENGLISH
INTRODUCTION AND INDEX
Poetic Forms Used In English is a project in which I INTEND TO WRITE AT
LEAST ONE POEM IN EVERY FORM USED IN ENGLISH AND, AS IT IS WORKING OUT, TO
DELVE FROM TIME TO TIME INTO FORMS FROM OTHER LANGUAGES WHICH MAY NOT, SO
FAR, HAVE BEEN USED IN ENGLISH. NO ONE CAN PUT A DEFINITE NUMBER ON HOW
MANY "ENGLISH" FORMS THERE ARE. THE VARIATIONS, VARIANTS, VERSIONS, THE
WHOLE, PARTIAL OR RE-ARRANGED BORROWINGS FROM OTHER LANGUAGES, AND THE
POSSIBILITIES WITHIN FORMS ARE TOO NUMBEROUS TO OFFER A STABLE COUNT.
ABOUT 400 -- perhaps. Began on July 18, 1997 (after two aborted earlier
efforts) I have as of today, February 5, 1999, written a poem in each of
326 different forms. The project continues...
The theme is desolation. Not only desolation of landscape and spirit, but
desolation of the mind, of psyche, creative energy. Many are positive
poems, as I happen to love the desolate landscape of the desert. When I
drive into the desert, see the desolation, the form and the bones of the
landscape, I feel I can breathe again. I love wide open spaces, spaces
where "nothing" grows. I love the sea. I love paved over and bricked in
spaces too, if they are beautifully proportioned and monumentally
conceived as is Red Square at the University of Washington and Red Square
in Moscow. When I was in Russia, the beauty of Red Square was mitigated,
for there were guards standing about making sure you walked within marked
paths across the vast open space. They didn't want you wandering just any
place in the nothingness. There is danger -- perhaps especially -- in
emptiness.
There are questions, poems, desolations of the mind that I cannot seem to
get beyond. Desolations in trying to solve problems, particularly the
problem: to see things as others do. I see the ridiculous in the held
opinions about many things on this wide green ball bouncing through the
void and realize that almost all of what is called "human knowledge"
consists of mere entertainment for the mind.
There are desolations
of being alone, desolations of being with others. There is also the
desolation of acquiring orphanhood at sixty-three; desolation as seen in a
sea of sand; in a morning with nothing to do. The poems are being posted
in the order in which they were written. They are, however, indexed
alphabetically by form name. (Some of the poems, but by no means all of
them, have individual names). Eventually I hope to cross-indexed all the
poems by type, country of origin, etc.
FOR THE MOST PART, I CHOOSE THE FORM OF THE DAY AT RANDOM -- WHATEVER
HAPPENS TO STRIKE MY FANCY. AN OPEN-ENDED ADVENTURE -- AS IS LIFE. I VERY
MUCH ENJOY THESE WANDERINGS ON THE "GRID", AND HOPE THAT YOU WILL TOO.
Jan Haag
February 26, 1999
University of Washington
Seattle, Washington
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Reposted from janhaag.com, URL: http://janhaag.com/PODesIntro.html
by AlwaysLisa@aol.com with Jan Haag's permission
The following one-hundred-four (104) poems were formerly posted on
AOL's Poetry Boards I, II, III by the plagiarizers, NorthStar1007,
Susanna, Baie, Baie d'Ange, Fred, Frederick, Fteregul, and possibly
persons using other code names or pseudonyms.
The original poems, with correct titles, dates, epigraphs and
epilogues are here reposted by AlwaysLisa@aol.com with the permission
of their author, Jan Haag.
The numbers from #i to #xv and from #1 to #336 within The Desolation
Poems/POETIC FORMS USED IN ENGLISH collection refer to the order in
which I wrote the poems.
Jan Haag
janhaag.com
September 21, 2001
The following eleven (11) poems are reposted from By Jan Haag,
http://janhaag.com/PODes-i-ixv.html
#i ACROSTIC I
1987
A CONSCIENCE ACCOUNTING
Curiosity eaten migrants, a cantata of old velvets of
darker-than-mossy-green shroud chic nacerous white baby's breath
sprays in cinematic spots down below the delicacy where mixed
seco candle wax drips tears with running blood. Mystical
Mu illuminates grotesquely bubbling phenomena. Egregious
energies scorch pitiful flesh of taut neti neti Indians who
survived a mini creation blast to become iniquitous,
fine-drawn, each-hand-out, kindly people, toothless, smiling,
trembling,
aggressive. In horror I shrink from long,
hermetic, crumpled fingers picking swollen limbs or quickly
go, coining reasons. Or not. Beneath my bosom-clutched
purse, only just breathing, knowing I am he and he
sees, under my pale urgency, the horror which
panic negligently accepts as living proof that, "Si,
si," times advance and feelings blow to proportions too
fine. I hide beneath the crumpled, verdant velvet where
non- noisy babies breathe, eaten by curious
antic gruesomeness, gently languorous, loathing you and me.
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#iii ALCAICS I
1987
FUNDRAISING
Foregoing laughter, rhyming and reasoning, for longer lengths of
time and for specialties, four hidden maidens marched while
singing furtively, slid to a halt and stood pale.
Five
under fifty greeted and grumbled to free what would have been
silently salient. Few famous, famished fortunes fumed or
furious, frowning sat sadly silent.
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#vi BALLAD I
6-30-85
After she met with love and regret, she sighed the day
long. She mooned in the night, a beautiful sight, so softly
singing this song.
During the day, she slept by the
way. Her trials and her tears made her strong, a beautiful
sight in the dead of the night, so softly singing this
song.
At dawn she would croon goodbye to the moon, laugh
with the sun, beyond wrong she sat late in the dusk, scented by
musk, so softly singing this song.
As the season went
round, she altered her gown, a new love for her came
along. Now mother and daughter sit by the water
so softly singing
this song.
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#vii BALLADE I
1985
CENSER
We lay in the red and gold light of warped moired silk shades to
shun the curious, also the night, nibbling flowers, thinking it
fun to admit we acted as one in the dark, sanctioning wild
schemes, inhaling the incense cotton, the thick-scented smoke
of old dreams.
On a pale pallet under bright dawn, while
the immaculate sun kept walled reality in flight, we smoked out
hope, making her run. Not old enough to be clean, none too
happy with life or sweet creams, we blotted the quip and the
pun, the thick-scented smoke of old dreams.
We rose after
hours in tight spaces, tracing the fuming gun of hard candy
fancies, a kite, a drum; nowhere a buttered bun, even for
breakfast. Like Trajan, we began to hide behind
teams, wondering why we'd only won the thick-scented smoke of
old dreams.
Now we stand at midday, all's done and old,
knowing stark, silent screams can do nothing, only beckon the
thick scented smoke of old dreams.
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#viii SICILIAN SESTET I
5-19-87
The roads run straight into the lake. Down deep, five feet or more
beneath the water, salt shifts, filling its subtle grades, blue-green.
Leap awy, avoid the coming tide, foam, malt, the doom that inch by
inch, silent, will seep through any fissure, shatter each small fault.
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#x HAIKU I
3-31-87
The skeeters shadow, obsidian set in light, interrupts the
frog.
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#xi TRIOLET II
5-21-87
Sorrow and freedom are as light as the kiss of a peacock's
wing. Grace, iridescent, lifts the night. Sorrow and freedom
are as light as the blue-green and blue of sight within eyes
gold and shimmering. Sorrow and freedom are as light as the
kiss of a peacock's wing.
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#xii TRIOLET III
5-21-87
I grieve for my mother being gone. I feel great freedom after her
flight. Lying under the trees on the lawn, I grieve for my
mother being gone. I see life's grace going on and on, observe
the heart growing erudite. I grieve for my mother being gone.
I feel great freedom after her flight.
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#xiii TRIOLET IV
5-21-87
Grief pierces my heart for those who have died and will die. My
spirit soars in freedom, lightened by those it lost. Not taught in
love, I've only known to count costs and sigh. Grief pierces my
heart for those who have died and will die. Lighter and lighter my
spirit rises to defy concealed boundaries, hidden struggles,
defiance storm tossed. Grief pierces my heart for those who have
died and will die. My spirit soars in freedom, lightened by those
it lost.
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#xiv HEROIC SESTET I
5-19-87
There is no sky. The clouds in white have hid the dome, the blue,
the immensity, width, distance the height, the depth. We thrust
steady amid the miasmic veil all shot with hope, a glance from
God, a whisper from the galaxy. We'll triumph by persistent
jets, you'll see.
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#xv ITALIAN SESTET I
5-19-87
The clouds have touched the mountain snow with lakes of deep and
humid blue. The sky kisses the tips of trees, straight, tall,
dark, reaching heights to scratch the cotton clouds with tender
rakes, and down along sheer cliffs, wild abysses condense its
sun bright days to awesome nights.
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Reposted from janhaag.com, URL: http://janhaag.com/PODes-i-ixv.html
by AlwaysLisa@aol.com with Jan Haag's permission
The above eleven (11) poems are reposted from By Jan Haag,
http://janhaag.com/PODes-i-ixv.html
The following poems were formerly posted on AOL's Poetry Boards I,
II, III by the plagiarizers, NorthStar1007, Susanna, Baie, Baie
d'Ange, Fred, Frederick, Fteregul, and possibly persons using other
code names or pseudonyms.
The original poems, with correct titles, dates, epigraphs and
epilogues are here reposted by AlwaysLisa@aol.com with the permission
of their author, Jan Haag.
The numbers from #i to #xv and from #1 to #336 within The Desolation
Poems/POETIC FORMS USED IN ENGLISH collection refer to the order in
which I wrote the poems.
Jan Haag
janhaag.com
September 21, 2001
The following eleven (11) poems are reposted from By Jan Haag,
http://janhaag.com/PODes001-033.html
#1 ACROSTIC II
7-18-97
To be so desolate for poetry! -- Hear my lone call from seas beyond
the sea! Earth house me, heaven nurture me, come rains,
Decide
my fate. O wind, destroy the pains Endured, the careful plans for
rectitude Sought high, or crept upon as light and rude. Once
writ, twice sold for practice, it is not Less easily, precisely
crafted, wrought, Addressed, sent out, purchased, remembered, told,
Told twice for lack or love of form. Each mold Intrinsically,
hermetically misfiled Over or under complications mild,
Nonce-formed, perfected, more than anyone can Peruse
conveniently or keep in mind. O do it, just do it! Try Zen, try pen
Embracing image and sense. Forget. Just ken Most gently what you
can. Life is not so short, So circumscribed as
poetry's last forte.
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#3 TELESTICH
7-20-97
Post concert, my heart soars opiated,
hosts higher enchantment, conceives Lethe
dreams, calls up desire, drums danger. Outcries
team through my passages, temples, and go
coon hunting beneath dark thoughts of cruel
boons granted by guru, wise without Sa.
Rings round the small, great eyes gleaming, protect
king prowling interstices, nobled koi
fish, sturdy from all tense drama, echo
wishes -- fearful as all becomes music known.
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#8 PANTOUM
7-26-97
The wild blue sky shelters the awful sun, the grey mud flats
consume the endless land, the desolation rules nothingness,
none but terrifying creatures try to stand.
The grey mud flats
consume the endless land, no trees or grasses blow nor shift the
wind but terrifying creatures try to stand against the storm, the
sand. The death's head grinned.
No trees or grasses blow nor
shift the wind or dance nor fill eternity with light against the
storm, the sand. The death's head grinned, its hollow eyes quite
empty, like the night.
The desolation rules nothingness,
none,
the wild blue sky shelters the awful sun.
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#9 KYRIELLE
7-27-97
The great oceans of ancient times yawn wide their jaws, their mountains
mist, the landscape, flat, dry and sand, mimes eternity's shores,
death's great fist.
The sun born amid chaos shines through the
sunset pass, verdant, kissed by unimagineable lines, eternity's
shores, death's great fist.
Reverberating like a gong behind
monumental rocks, hissed great snakes, green and bright blue,
along eternity's shores, death's great fist.
Freedom! the soul
cries gliding by through the rocks looking for the gist of life's
charm that might justify eternity's shores, death's great
fist.
Tears fall as the boundless beauty of nothingness sheers
high, a twist, a fine, spare elegance to see
eternity's shores, death's great fist.
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#11 HAIKU II
7-29-97
The smell in the air,
pure, sensuous, radiant --
sun shine as bird song
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#12 SICILIAN TERCET/TRIPLET
7-29-97
The mountains, gray and quite transparent, drift one over, under,
through each other, high above the
desert salt and sandy cliff.
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#13 ENGLISH SONNET (Shakespearean)
8-6-97
When memories begin to rise from my sonambulant and sleepy brain,
twilight clears clouds that seem to gather to defy the sun, the
warmth, the life, the dance, the bright
blue beauty of a dying
summer's lore. When stars begin to wink new fears rise up always
new fears. Does God want terror more or humans' pitiful love in a
cup
with golden etchings commemorating the memorable few times
when God's kind smile outweighed his wrath? Is God mean and
blaming small, frightened and as full of fear, nay vile
as
creatures born of his loneliness, born
in his image, born cringing, forlorn.
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#16 CINQUAIN
8-9-97
To die today like this, unleash to float among the molecules,
at last released . . . Where to?
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#18 BLUES SONNET
1-19-98
"Huis the pronoun of divine Presence."
All humans make up sacred words for praise. Yes, humans make up mighty
words for praise, then shock themselves with the constructed
maze.
So men and women make up words to shock. Yes, humans will
construct wild words to shock then make audacious, wiley use of
stock
small bugaboos, mosquito-haunted finds. Yes, bugaboos,
mosquito-haunted finds --
buzzing, burring, exacting haunted minds
that dare not speak of
allahiorhu. Yes, dare not speak of
allahiorhu, the rich, creative, too exacting few
who decline to conceive of "one with God," be "deified" and burst, with hu,their pod.
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#23 ENGLISH ODE
1-24-98
The desert stretches to the winds, to sands beyond the hills, to cactus
prickly green and blue, the sky above as pale as lands all washed by
winter snow. But heat -- a sheen, a sheet, a sword, a violent
furor of rays -- so strong no one can see the light in sun's great
circle shimmers, glints and glows, and bids each creature to exult in
war against denied, curtailed, quite blinded sight, to find some
means to overcome its foes,
find shade, cool rest from deserts
lying -- won because it hides, it waits, it melts, it steals all
things: will, water, rights -- to feed the sun's insatiable
brightness. Its shine congeals what is not there. It manifests
mirages, and vision, elusive insight, cold nights, bright moons,
inhospitable, reclusive long views of solitude in dreams, barrages
of pains, hallucinations, small delights, rage, sorrow, hatred,
fury, fire. If
short life were lived on a desert plateau with
wind and sand and stars and scentless waste, desireless stasis,
Argus-eyed deep woe to watch each Io move, each breath, each
taste, the sun would burn up envy, fever, too, and leave the
mountains bare and stark, a place with widening space and air so clear
and cliffs of joy so sheer, one's desert love would woo the beating
heart to happiness like lace
quite fine, quite sheer, quite open, and bestow all gifts.
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#33 QUATRAIN
2-2-98
Simple and easy, really quite queasy is how one feels after the
news, merry and glarey, really quite darey as if one had a pair of
new shoes
to dance and romance, without a glance to future or
past or civility. Lewd is the news, crude, rude, and booed, with
lightweight anchors loaded with millions
to gossip and giggle and
tell the dirt to flirt with porn which has become the norm to
aid the world to attend to murder
while earth shattering slaughters go unheard of.
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#36 SICILIAN OCTAVE
2-5-98
The daffodils rise up above the earth to take a peek at spring. Has she
come? Will she? Won't she? Snowdrops, hyacinths, need birth, and
tulips, too. The crocus must fulfill her purple promised cup of gold,
her mirth. The wind must blow, the buds must nod. No ill can come
once spring agrees to trust that dearth,
all winter's frozen charm, has mailed his bill.
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#38 TRIOLET V
2-7-98
For Bill Clinton, whose political opponents are trying to rape him, in
February of 1998,
and for Kenneth Starr, who one might put
under oath and question abouthissex life.
Who among us was
not brought up to lie about their nighttime life? Sex and silence
are designed to sup. Who among us was not brought up to confine our
needs in a small cup?
Sexsanssilence brings national
strife. Who among us was not brought up
to lie about their nighttime life?
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#45 RONDELET
2-13-98
What? Me or I? The soul protests and stands its ground. What? Me
or I? It looks with disenchanted eye. It hears discriminated
sound. It needs to build a sorrow mound.
What? Me or I?
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#48 VILLANELLE
2-14-98
O, the movements on earth are amazing. As a crab you can live
intertidal, rest abandoned on the dark sand singing.
If you
have a celestial yearning, as a star you'll wander sidereal. O, the
movements on earth are amazing.
Even to the ocean currents twining
Coriolis effects are not lethal, rest abandoned on the dark sand
singing.
If you're fat and most sleepily longing choose
hibernation when corporeal. O, the movements on earth are
amazing.
If it's too hot and you long for cooling, aestivate
prior to winds autumnal, rest abandoned on the dark sand
singing.
Whatever you do, wherever flinging, create, recreate
like God supernal. O, the movements on earth are amazing,
rest abandoned on the dark sand singing.
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#49 SESTINA
2-14-98
The desert opens into solitude. The high cliffs of loneliness stand
inside the sky gazing down on the blazing sand. The white sun,
invisible and brilliant, shines on a land without trees, without
rivers, on a land architectonic and nude.
The mountain rocks are
glitteringly nude, their crevices offer dark solitude. The deep lava
once flowed in vast rivers. Then washed by the grit, the wind ran
inside onto the caves' smooth floors where no sun shines on darkness
damper than cool ocean sand.
There was stillness, the cool silence
of sand. The seepage exposed canyons vast and nude, Their obsidian,
black, gold, glossy shines. They know the awesome void of
solitude on which one may rough climb, lay claim inside on the
nothingness of sky pale rivers.
They watch desert dust devils jump
rivers, they value heat, the ever shifting sand. The caves in the
mountains offer inside their night the shelter of pale creatures
nude on full moon or the new moon's solitude. One can reconcile any
thing that shines.
The lava shines, the granite hard rock
shines, the cactus even shines and the rivers -- theaters of time
and lost solitude -- their polished surfaces submit to sand on which
they lay claim as nature quite nude. Onlookers, unused to desert
inside
the heart or outside, try again inside, theorize about
everything that shines. The palo verde, all sleek and quite
nude, thermal in design, green as the rivers on their way through
mountain passes and sand, on the hot, dry land, stands in
solitude.
The caves inside are carved by great rivers. The sun
shines forever making the sand
on the desert nude for walled solitude.
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#55 RONDEL
2-19-98
The hyacinth's proud stalk tassels wide in spring. It's blooms are of
pink or of white or of blue and scented with crispness and sweetness
and dew. It blooms and it dies before the sweet black
Bing
cherries yield their buds and white blossoms to
sing their fruits' sweetness, crispness and blushing dark hue. The
hyacinth's proud stalk tassels wide in spring. It's blooms are of
pink or of white or of blue.
Each single blossom or cherry might
yet cling even in the great English gardens of Kew were it not for
Spring's appetites ever new to devour each fiery passion's brief
fling. The hyacinth's proud stalk tassels wide
in spring.
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#58 SPLIT COUPLET
2-21-98
She found in time more answered questions yet unasked,
undreamt,
discovered, though her mind was curious, she,
furious,
would hide her ostrich head down deep in sand avoiding
grand
or complicated plans to go, to know the gifts, the
foes,
quite overwhelmed by multitudes of earth's so subtle
mirths
revealing wisdom, woes and lessons vast, shadows that
cast
an endless night on this particular human's
durbar
in which her highest dreams record just she
alone with
thee.
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#58 SPLIT COUPLET (alternate version)
2-21-98
I found in time more answered questions yet unasked,
undreamt,
discovered, though my mind was curious, I,
furious,
would hide my ostrich head down deep in sand avoiding
grand
or complicated plans to go, to know the gifts, the
foes,
quite overwhelmed by multitudes of earth's so subtle
mirths
revealing wisdom, woes and lessons vast, shadows that
cast
an endless night on this particular human's
durbar
in which my highest dreams record just me
alone with
thee.
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#63 RONDINE
2-26-98
Decasyllabic is the pentameter line but hende or hexa or octa is
okay. Ga-lumpf, ga-lumpf, ga-lumpf, ga-lumpf, ga-lumpf, you may, but
variations are keen and, furthermore, fine. They add a certain elegance
like new white wine or grape juice freshly squeezed under the sun's
bright ray. Decasyllabic,
the ancient modified-Germanic love of
sine waves calculated at any lengths, will alay love of order --
fudged here, pushed there. The lust for pay off will decide who'll
successfully shine and dine,
decasyllabic-ly.
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#68 OCTAMETER COUPLET
2-28-98
"'March: an Ode' [by Swinburne], is the only instance in the language
of a poem written in octameters." OED, "O" page 53
Do not worry over much
or over tea.
Listen to me. Listen
to the sea.Carry your arms at rest
and let God's nestlings be.
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#69 CLERIHEWS
3-1-98
Did Bill Clinton,
earth's biggest one,
arrive at the top
only to
flop?
Kenneth Starr is very far from the truth, malicious and
somewhat uncouth, for indulging in sex, even for REX, is about as
criminal as shuffling card decks
Independent Council Starr
listening to all that are willing to sing and sting misrepresents the
bar. For indulging in sex, even for a presidented, is less criminal
than laws being re-invented.
Lewinsky was out to get him. She
wanted sex on whatever limb, Weaned on TV no doubt, she badly
misjudges what life is about.
Even Peter Jennings must bow to
TV's lurid need to wow, to do in the world's personages with teapot
tempests puffed to outrageous.
President Clinton must keep his
pecker in even though his right to privacy is no sin. Imagine
Hilary's chagrin when they win to find in her bed all those wimin!
Dr. Lewinsky, give your daughter the key, advise her to back off
from her spree. Have her come home, away from the "beast," or ship
her to Nome or to Rome at the least.
Chelsea Clinton, her visage
plain, must feel enormous pain as she goes to bed each Stanford
night
thinking of her father's public and private plight.
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#70 ELEGIACS
3-2-98
Pure grief, pure pain, pure greed, pure loss, saved from a life lust,
never afraid, for the fear, horror can't get any worse,
"Out,
out!" you cry, wail: "Why!" Screech, plead, waiting to die. "Trust me,"
saith God, and dim terror makes you laugh. "What a curse!"
Not
perfect, not surfeit, not friendly, not out of gratitude, you flee.
"O,
dearest God, it is quite clear you're as helpless as me."
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#72 ITALIAN OCTAVE
3-3-98
Divine beauty, a little sorrow -- how proportions change as years go
by. Laughter becomes companion, friend, and salts the fur of pain,
hobbles memory, lights the Tao. Nature's rapid spring, fall do not
allow among its rich colors the curse or burr of ice nor desert.
Great planes of peace stir,
gently enfolding beauty's divine now.
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#76 BALLADE SUPREME
3-8-98
Under ice-cold, frosted spring dew close upon the ground, and quite
white, the lawns appear like crystal glue -- a unity of snow. The
rite which has metamorphosed the night, turned dark to light, cold,
like the moon silvering, shimmering, a covered boon making buds
withdraw while vines decline, will not, luckily, last past noon. The
trees will grow, the sun will shine.
The blossoms will have endured
the blue melting of the sky from ink to light where, now with colors
bright in hue, they will not hesitate to write
of warmth, of joy,
renewal, cite with heady scents and sheer clear tune the birds
return, the lake's new loon. All spring, as one, serves up its
wine. Even deep in the forest, soon the trees will grow, the sun
will shine.
And yet, in its heart, waits nature's cue, patient,
safe, curled, hid out of sight, the hardened frost, the cold that's due
when weather fails the tight strung kite and high winds blows
across the site. Creatures, lizards, snakes on the dune make
pattern's not unlike the rune. If cautiously, slowly read line by line
in a mournful invocational croon: the trees will grow, the sun will
shine.
Shiva views the heart in a swoon. Digambara, nude
as a
'coon he'll walkabout as sky clad Jain preening, loving, so that in
June
the trees will grow, the sun will shine.
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#84 OCTAVE
3-14-98
The woman's lips blue-black, swollen and overfed, her body lumpish
with undigested bread and desserts, retaining will enough to
breathe in, sigh, and out, her drooping eyes closing down, the
child with mucus running from its nose -- both ugly enough to be
chosen for death in ancient India among people where only beauty
was allowed to live --
She thwarts the child, the child screams,
thrashes. She snatches a milk bottle from her over- flowing bag,
sticks the nipple in its mouth determined food, force fed, her sole
comfort will assuage the awful terror, the fire, the burning
spite. It throws the bottle in- to -- slim, silent, regal, reading --
a man's lap. Milk beads on his trousers. He faintly
smiles,
delicately thrusts the bottle back at the frantic, no doubt,
accidental former womb, and, politely, restrains himself, as I
restrain myself from a shrill cry: "The child doesn't want the milk!"
It's body writhes like a mutilated snake, tosses, slithers,
gyrates, climbs from the soft, tired arms. Nipple again, again the
toss. Caught. It screams,
it whines, it sobs. "Put the milk in the
God- damned sack!" I'd shout, but the bus turns into a different
lane. "Aloha," I spy the exotic Hawaiian name on a Catholic
street in the Northwest rain. The street, under repair has altered
its barricade. The bus can stop closer to home. I rise. "Can I get off
here?" Forgo the judge's role? "For an extra
charge." We both
laugh. "Thank you," I step from the bus. "Have a nice day." At last!
Silence! Its spring! The fresh, silent air of the traffic's roar --
I start down hill. The stars of the forsythia stab high -- two,
four feet above the Cascades. The jumping yellow jacks pull the bees
and the quiet out of the innocent sky that lies
nearby and
beyond satiety's mountain.
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#86 ROUNDEL (Sketch)
3-16-98
Blueblack Nubian boy, piece of diamond dirt, unsuitable, and you can't
leave him alone. Child in your care, love is unsuitable, child in
your care, they would have you forebear to bear. Child in your care,
did you rape him?as they say, or release him from melancholy,
sleepless desire, eons of despair. Love! they prate, miscegenation
they fear, death they insure.
How old was Romeo? What age Juliet?
Make up stories, live them down, forbid them love.
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#86 ROUNDEL
3-16-98
Blueblack Nubian boy, piece of diamond dirt, child in her care, and she
can't leave him to toy. Child in her care, they insist she forbear
hurt, Blueblack Nubian boy.
Youth in her care, love is
unsuitable. Coy child who cares, dares love. Raped him, they say, the
flirt, released from melancholy, his desire, joy.
Shackle his
despair! Girt up her love! They're curt, Make up stories, live them
down, hide death's envoy: magnet and iron, blue bones and white gyrate,
Blueblack Nubian boy.
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#91 SEXTILLA
3-21-98
I hold up my heart like a shield, its favors sheer and well
steeled. My mind is a wall against grief. I live the beginning of
night, saved by anticipating flight. Mercifully, my time is yet
brief.
The fountains of cherry blossoms cascade in the
Arboretum's alleys of silver and gold sun light, reflecting the
moon's pale froth with her clouds and her veils like moth
wings
wide on my bare escutcheon.
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#96 SEXTILLA II
3-23-98
I was meek and demure and mild, with a heart quite joyous and
wild, willing to forgo in life man's love which he declares, lauds
and fans, vowing forever, asking trust, and leaving, of course, when
he must.
But when he returned with a quest and I, in all
innocence, jest not -- insisted on being joyous, exultant, wild,
myself -- the us dissolved in his panic, for he
sought meek, mild,
motherly, not me.
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#97 SEXTILLA III
3-23-98
I saw perfection once in life; next time I couldn't see at
all. Gradually the iron knife penetrated my fragile shawl of
admiration, search to be, as an equal, betrothed to
thee.
Perfection thrived, perfection soared, Foolish, I began to
live, became quite skillful, often gored, bled with grace, lost face
to give unrequited love. Grew in strength,
fought pain, joy when I
was spurned at length.
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#98 TRIPLET
3-24-98
When will high stamina desert Me totally -- to deal with the
hell Man has made?
I caw with the birds in lyrical flight.
Swift through the mottled, illumined twilight, And weep.
Knowing communality would destroy Me utterly, I remain as
myself, Separately,
Not yet embraced, drowned, in comfortable
Ocean. Ah, to cease the torture of my Own mind,
Seek
dissolution, a singular death, Ah, to dissolve in the seas. Ah, the
ease,
The ease.
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#99 SHORT COUPLET
3-25-98
The leaden largesse of fear abides deep in my gut and skillfully
hides
its origins in the mudane world. Overfed, overbred
and fooled
by gloomy psychic storms, proxy norms: Madonna on the
foxy
screen, day-glo, hybrid, un-natured tulips bend in trained
curtsies to brawl
for space and fame in flowered beds. Ah, hide
their heads! They'll not hear the treads
of bulb-snatchers under
moonlight. Their voiceless throats screaming their
plight
staunch hope and lift pride as they'll be auctioned for a
staggering fee.
Next year the market will triple. Each man bets
his gold and nipple.
How can we justify such Ides in March? "Et
tu?" -- hear horrid cries?
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#102 ITALIAN MADRIGAL IN TERZA RIMA
3-27-98
The blind children of our television's age of scorn for human life, and
especially death -- they see not the consequences of their
rage.
They shoot to kill, to eliminated all breath, not knowing
fragile bodies once stopped will lie silent forever in the still arms
of Seth.
Who is Seth? They, not old enough to descry life and
evil, death or eternity's tax, sit incarcerated in cells and
defy
the tears that rise from the ignorance that racks their
hearts as children unable to face facts -- wanting home and mother's
dinner, their small wage,
wanting to wander fields, laugh, to smell the
sage.
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#104c SICILIAN SONNET
3-29-98
The ancient Chinese were obsessed with all writing; Hindus are
ensorceled with sound, sonorous speech; Tibetans enhance their land's
visual charm citing
Om Mani Padme Hum on mandala, rock reach,
on
thangka, stupa, chhorten, stone -- lighting
paths with Siddham,
Gupta,
Lentza to beseech the winds, the Gods, the trees without indicting
earth's initial capacity to teach.
The southern boy gripping
the old black man's hand. a flash on tv as fast as rela on a
State
visit to the slaves forefather's land, tripping down steps suited,
together, bella, the fragile ex-prisoner, the harassed
man, love
for each other, Clinton and Mandela.
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Inspired by the image of Clinton and Mandela on the March 26, 1998 tv
news broadcast, both CBS and PBS and probably all the others, where
Clinton, on his visit to Africa was descending some stairs holding the
79 year old Mandela's hand. It was so touching, that at the first
glimpse (on CBS) tears sprang into my eyes. An image of human
compassion and unity and brotherhood far beyond any of their well
meaning, well spoken words. The image should be made into a poster and
sold throughout America and Africa.
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#106 TERZA RIMA
3-31-98
Within the envelope of my joyous heart I keep the sealed letter of your
sad harms hoping the warmth of its pulsing beat will chart
a new
calligraphy, new runes, new charms, elevating your mood to
spontaneous delight, in thoughts to over-write alarms,
making a
palimpsest as full, glorious as the twiggy tracery writ over by
blooms sparking the world with springs notorious
sweet smells,
sweet scents, filling all the gloomy rooms
with new patterns on new
wrought, intricate looms.
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#110 ECHO VERSE
4-4-98
They dismissed me from the top priority in hell.
My sins were small, even when I felt quite well enough
to gad and carp and caw. As a curlew, sharp beaked, is
found on shore, so, at sea, all birds who are are enough.
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In hell
Enough
Is
Enough
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Nor were angels keen to see me arrive in heaven.
Their nets were out for certifiable, pure gold, too.
But base metal, as a human is, they cried: "Let be!"
So cry curlews, pelicans, and cormorants: "Let be!"
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In heaven
Too
Let be
Let be
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#116 LONG OCTAVE
4-9-98
Do all man-made beauties contain a heart of evil, built over pain,
capturing glories of nature's wealth for private gain, approval's lure,
dazzling the heart of love to remain ensnarled by outer show,
impure foundations returned by charity's stealth,
saying to the others of earth, "Endure"?
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#117 SHORT HYMNAL OCTAVE
4-10-98
The pattern of morning's black silence, of emptiness, rain is
ripped by the alarm of greed, of lack. With more respect for
gain, and a very backhanded knack for security in vain. Please
get rid of your protected stack,
so we can ignore your pain.
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#118 HENDECASYLLABICS
4-11-98
Dus la phab, "to fall into time" (Tibetian)
Down the clear straight passage of "might-be" surges the density of
"is."
Timelessness free falls into time. The known event now emerges as
action; "will" that waited as "was" will cease yet ever be -- seen,
unseen.
Holography, real as vision, dissolves when the last piece
disappears from the pool of eternity.
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#119 HENDECASYLLABICS II
4-11-98
Dus la phab, "to fall into time" (Tibetian)
Hover outside of time with dreams, with hopes free to be or not be,
choosing not as spring might once have sought to be other than she now
is. No choice tenders the shining light of sun, moon stars. Wind,
rain move across the world avoiding webs of spiders entangled threads
restaining
febrile choice and the choiceless leach of seized
time.
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#120 HENDECASYLLABICS III
4-11-98
Dus la phab, "to fall into time" (Tibetian)
Hover outside of time with dreams, with hopes free to be or not be,
careful with spring urges once willed beyond harmony seeking to
see no choice tenders the shining light of sun, moon stars. Wind,
rain move across the wild world to chime webs of spiders entangled
threads which pontoon febrile choice and the choiceless leach of
seized time. Down the clear straight passage of "might-be"
surges the density of "is." Timelessness free falls into time. The
known event now emerges as action; "will" that waited as "was" will
cease yet ever be -- seen, unseen. Holography, real as vision,
dissolves when the last piece
disappears from the pool of eternity.
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#124 DOUBLE ACROSTIC
4-14-98
Another day begins in the life of Anna.
Nighttime has passed and the rains are soon to begin.
Nature shifts her head eager to seek out the sun.
May's kissing winds will dominate the wet, the warm.
Arise dear Anna and consume your banana.
Nothing will prevent variety's graceful swoon.
Nowhere to hide from the princely day's gusty boon.
Intense, more magic than the wandering Magi,
Numinous gifts are brought by her dance to the fern,
Goddess Anna, enigma, pale princess, green frog.
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#126 COMPOUND ACROSTIC
4-16-98
Mistress Ann reaches into her seventies
Ascending slowly, gracefully, one by one.
Numinous energy emerging to rev
Nascent ascents of the spiritual eye.
Intuitive stretching for teaching to learn
Not to falter on the cool, tree bordered taut
Ground which shows unquestioned, fidelity's way,
Answering the great soul, the sphere, the mango
Nutrients blessed by the sun, the falling rain,
Nature's rocks rounding - the path of an Essene.
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#131 ALEXANDRINE COUPLET
4-21-98
A dark and gloomy day, pigmented by the moon -- who failed to set, who
failed to leave, who would not swoon
into the thickness of the
night, into the cloud that dark, with glimmering rim, invited like a
shroud
of sacrilegious candles lit to shine along the way of
strange behavior, odd, eccentric, strong
and motivated,
misalignment, across the dune which even the isolated, lonely, haunted
loon
forsook, and pushed its dark head into the lake, bowed by
the shocking ineptitude of time banging and loud
-- ended
inevitably in darkness to prolong
what would otherwise end with a
resounding gong.
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#135 BALLAD II
4-25-98
O God, I love the desert and solitude stories, the wind sucking the
land and the bones of the humans dry, the feel of salt and grit on the
lips, and the crunch of the sand under tires, the snow arriving in
flurries, the heat arriving in flames, the vultures, the dead white
sky, the wind sucking the land and the bones of the humans
dry,
The mountains circle, the sage grows grey over the rocks,
the wind sucking the land and the bones of the humans dry, The soft
quiet of dusk, stark silence under the stars reigns over a world
without time locks or ticking clocks. Thorns flourish, love lies
buried. I came out alone to die -- the wind sucking the land and the
bones of the humans dry,
Sing me songs, tell me gruesome stories,
the lore about the wind sucking the land and the bones of the humans
dry. Nourished by nothing, I'll grasp the gaps between
galaxies. Nothing of life, nothing of earth, nothing of love can rout
O God, your infinite despair! You will not deny
the wind sucking the land and the bones of the humans dry.
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#141 SICILIAN QUATRAIN
5-1-98
Susceptibility greater than conscience knows sits on his heart, waits
as greed for beauty irradiates his personal wild foes which, with
random, smiling ubiquity,
convince the others, energy and
need, to fight, to gain, to be a vessel full of reasons to kill, to
conquer, set new seed, to breed and breed and breed, neglecting
dull,
mild sense and gentle, sweet reason by blind untempered
arrogance which, claiming first place, feels free to butcher all
others, plant, kine
insect, weed in expanding, self-justifying thirst.
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#144 VIRELAI
5-4-98
In rich spring's grey gloom the sun has no room. Rebel. Don't let
the clouds loom. Rescue from the tomb my bell. Hold it by the
flume. Resist ringing doom and tell
how the passions
quell when the high bells knell the rite. Snatch sun from the
well. Jiggle each prime cell to write of the merry dell. Ding
dong, ding dong, pell mell, cite
great arcs toward the
light, turn, turn the wheelwright, boom, boom, pound from a great
height, let God show his might zoom, zoom. Let it rain at
night and dazzle the white
plumed womb.
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#147 HEROIC COUPLET
5-7-98
The largest things are larger than the sun, the moon, the stars. The
cosmos sings in fun
of nothing, void, of emptiness, of fear. Be
cautious, careful, sensitive like deer.
Run swift, run nimble, hide
in clear blue air. In space is vastness, darkness, no one
there.
Re-think the little things like you and me.
Forget the
clouds, the rain. Let sunshine be.
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#151 SHORT OCTAVE
5-10-98
Memories briefly serve to resurrect contact with the hidden,
capacious mind. Rushing, forgoing tact, large landscapes wind and
curve, passionately subtract details from the heart's beat entwined
with longing, fable, fact.
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#152 ENVELOPE COUPLET
5-11-98
Light mauve surrounds the evening sky, a grand dame marking her time to
die. With wisps of silver clouds enclosed, horizons momentarily
posed, she illuminates horizons high above the westward turning
eye.
Beyond the mountains she'll defy the guards of approaching
inky dye, Indigo forests, obsidian cliffs. In the harrowing, dull
obsequious shifts, she'll lose, of course, and bargain, buy
a purple
morning with her lie.
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#155 SICILIAN QUATRAIN II
5-14-98
The gold and glory of morning lit the world, spinning the blue-green
ball on its axis. From dark to light and back again it hurled
enjoying its sidereal practice.
Great love was vowed and love
returned until man appeared with knife, gun and need to breed beyond
all reason, all chastening pain, to kill
the nuturing earth whose needs
he neglects to heed.
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#158 RUBAIYAT
5-17-98
Montezuma's pine sends
candles toward the sky and silver
mantles, sunlit, green, graceful,
long needles down to the ground
where my sandals
walk upon the
grass as lightly as light upon
the sky, gently among the daisies,
the cotton, breathing brilliant
air intently,
gazing toward the
zenith where pine mingles with
the wind, lends the vine
monumental, noble
structure, where the
cottonwood's tufts of fine
silk
fly against the sky,
snowflakes of spring. Intimate the
earth quakes, as a damsel
approached by vandals,
trembling lace on pines, hidden lakes.
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#159 INTERLOCKING RUBAIYAT
5-18-98
The friend's departure fills me with a dread of many things we might
have left unsaid both what we voiced, what we left in silence on
which the wild imagination fed.
In civilized, courteous
compliance each forgives the other's odd dalliance, and fiddles with
wood and dangerous fire, incensed, longing for incense's
fragrance.
For love is deep and love is strong as wire binding
each to each through the immense mire of shattered, irreconcilable
dreams burning lifetimes of karma on the pyre.
Departure, even
in love, often seems as final as the unheard crash of beams in
ancient houses left on the homestead.
Yet, unseamed, cherishing each
will write reams.
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#160 RUBAI
5-18-98
One's had enough experience, she cries, with rancorous temperament,
but espys the flaw in momentary reasoning knowing that time's wing flies and flies and
flies.
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#161 SPENSERIAN STANZA
5-19-98
Pigmented dark, the chlorophyll rises wayward in spring to tree tops
and flower leaves, veridian green, causing veridic crises. The
naked branches, used to winter's freeze, must cloth themselves in
blossoms though it grieves them to hide their sturdy brown limbs, their
high twigs. They wait in shame for autumn's golden sheaves, dancing
beneath their gowns of green to gigs
created by their unwanted, leafy,
musical wigs.
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#163 ENGLISH MADRIGAL
5-21-98
It spins from the house tops, it will formulate sprials predicting the
wind across the sea, like smoke in the air, your love, your great love
for me.
You claim it in the open street, adumbrate it in my
closed, warm, loving arms that free. It spins from the house tops, it
will formulate sprials predicting the wind across the
sea.
Alone, forlorn, like ash upon the grate I contemplate, the
fog bound, thin grey tree sharing its amorphous, light veil like
thee. It spins from the house tops, it will formulate sprials
predicting the wind across the sea,
like smoke in the air, your love,
your great love for me.
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#166 SYNONYMOUS PARALLELISM
5-24-98
There are times of despair in life, there are times of heart-felt
pain, there are times for the gnashing of teeth, times for
screaming, times for ranting and weeping, times for secluding one's
self, times to hide from the pain of life, and the pain of human
beings, times to return to the earth as a tree, as a flower that blooms
and dies, swiftly it blooms and swiftly it dies, for the time of beauty
is short. The persistence of anguish is long, the time of despair is
forever.
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#168 HEROIC SESTET II
5-26-98
To sounds of fragile, breaking ice resound the deep currents that
flow beneath the sea, drumbeats from the heart of liquid earth
floating free. Where else can be found, a sound more deep,
profound than cool tears from the clouds, cold, ice-blue, pure
blood from rivers, their
crystalized love melting in flood.
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#169 SICILIAN SESTET III
5-27-98
The theater is a
place for showing sweet life as it was meant to be before dear death
doth take us to the grave wailing because of having to endure the
lore we applauded in the theater ring:
tragedies, so called heros, and the bore.
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#170 COMMON OCTAVE
5-28-98
The rain has gone, the sun has come. Full, heavy, grow the leaves. The
flowers fall, their scent dispersed from brooding great dark
trees. Beware when walking lightly from the sun into the seas. Go
slowly, carefully, immersed
in song and gentle ease.
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#179 HEROIC OCTAVE in Sicilian & Italian Quatrains
6-2-98
Up rises the sun, to its vocational duty. Did
it have a choice in beauty's test? It's glory shines for the
recessional just before night when the earth darkens for rest
-- shining red, gold, incandescent in the west Still, they
say its time is conditional, and from its view we are
peripheral,
our view of its beauty, a temporary
jest.
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#180 SYNTHETIC PARALLELISM in CLASSICAL PENTAMETER
6-3-98
Black is the bird which stays high, black in the sun as it sets. Gold it
will drop from its wings, gold you can catch from the light.
Day falls to
dark and regrets. Flight is eternal delight past the moon's silver respite.
Egrets arise in the dawn.
Egrets in passionate white, pawning the sun
with their wings
light on the marsh where fish sing, spawning mosquitoes in rings.
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#181 ANTITHETICAL PARALLELISM
6-4-98
I am happy, yet my heart remembers the pain. I sing for joy, yet my heart
cries in sorrow. I climb the unsullied top of the towering hill, yet my
feet slog through the deep mud of despair. When will the time of hurt and of
weeping be past? When will the tears of happiness last to water
the land and the forests, the flowers, the hills forever?
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#182 CLIMACTIC PARALLELISM
6-5-98
Spring -- that begins with little buds wintering over, pushes up the
crocuses, persuades the snowdrops to bloom and die, suns the daffodils
into flower, the tulips -- O Spring -- in the cascades of the
cherry's pink and white, in the plum's plume, in apple's blush, white and
scarlet --
Spring O Spring -- that blows the rhododendron's
trumpets, the azalea's horn -- when do you announce your Summer
retirement? With the accumulation of the darkening leaves, the
chlorophyll canopies overhead, dark as winter, black as a storm beneath
the shade that blots the sun? Silent.
Seattle Summer.
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#183a HEROICS, Heroic Stanzas, Heroic Quatrain
6-6-98
I study the muqarnas, and Fatehpur Sikri,
the Alhambra and the Blue Mosque, Hagia Sophia
named, as my mother was named, for wisdom. I
contemplate Hajj to the Kaaba, the qibla walls,
dance with the Sufi, take my turn at whirling, walk
across the desert footsteps made by the silk traders, and their
camels -- tin tin na / dhin na / dhin na.
Deep in the heart of
my desolation -- while I dwell in the rectangular earth dining on
dates, drying out figs, sweetening my coffee with the morning music of
the Qu'ran, with the muezzin's call from the minaret -- I find the
grid, the structure of the pattern, the geometry in the light, whether
of rugs or squinches, pendentives or arches supporting
the
Dome of the Rock. Knocking my head like a Jew against the mihrab,
beheading goats with the Hindu Nepalese, chanting ten thousand
strong with Tibetan Buddhists in the Himalayas (the mountains were
moved), embracing Shiva on the charnel ground, Kali with her skulls,
Christ, bloody on the cross, I study. Muqarnas decorate and
support, the design in the rug's pattern
encodes the wisdom of the
guru the ayatolla, the sage. It's key unlocks the gate of heaven.
As the tumblers fall, the shuttle flies across my loom, my needle
stitches. Shakti awakes. I begin my pilgrimage to Mecca in the
darkness of my heart where the sun, now setting, turns all wisdom
to black figures against the blazing light.
They walk on
shafts of gold out from the garden into the heaven of illumination.
The brain is electricity,
the heart, a galaxy beyond galaxies.
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#191 SEPTENARY
6-14-98
O sweet, Devayani, think not of love today. Winter has come,
the naked boughs have given up their colors of scarlet and
green. Refreshment lies at the end of the tongue, and the stratified
hum of memory. Things that have been, and gloriously gone, are
seen
only through glass, only through the gem of solitude's gentle
grace, where the bones go slow, the tips of the fingers settle
for sight's old role, and the days fall like spring's last
fragrant petal.
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#193 PRIMER COUPLET
6-16-98
Up in the morning Smile without warning
Bright as the
sun Until day is done
Shine like the moon Not unlike the
loon
Deep in the night Do not take fright
The nightingale rails
And the dream boat sails
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#194 SAPPHIC LINE
6-17-98
Jonquil came to me in a dream of fragrance like the spring: fresh,
young as the rain that falls free from the sunshine sky. With her
bobbing head held
high to catch the wind in its pure
unscented dash across the land, choosing her life so wet,
wild, yellow, prototype for the sun. Ah how brief
stays the sun
in orbit among the lasting stars, the black night, empty, eternal
space, not fully born, and not yet allowed to darken.
Hued like
Jonquil's hair, does it gain with age or death? When will we know
and/or cease to long for
answers filamented as fine as frayed threads.
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#195 TRIAD II, TERCET II, or THIRTEENER + THREE
One Poem In Three Forms
6-17-98
TRIAD II
Freeway Park Fountain Thundering Blue-Black
Pigeon In the Sand Wings at Point Tail at Rest Head
Down Asleep
Forever
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TERCET II
Freeway
Park Fountain thundering Blue-black pigeon
In the
sand Wings at point Tail at rest
Head
down Asleep
Forever
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THIRTEENER + THREE
In Freeway Park, fountain thundering, blue-black pigeon
in the sand, wings at point, tail at rest, head down asleep,
forever.
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#196 ENCLOSED TERCET/TRIPLET
6-18-98
Did the pigeon die upon her nest? I could not touch her, would not move
her from her
rest -- black back feathers ruffled white by a fly.
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#199 NASHERS
6-20-98
Medical man is busy in the business of creating diseases. What was
overwork, upchucking, boredom, greed, and sneezes,
became dangerous
Latinate malaises: hypertension, bulimia, CFS, AIDS, stress:
multitudinous doctor-induced anxietia --
all symptoms essential to
sustain the doctor's yacht especially if you don't mind your good sense
being bought
or health insurance to build high-rises, and pay
for medically induced big prizes.
So, rather than relax, rest
more, take a walk, eat less, patient man agrees he's a
difficult-to-cure, complex mess,
gobbling pills and submitting to
incisions quite incapable of making sane decisions,
certainly
never resting with his wealth, always needing more,
while practicing acephalo-acardiensis upon the poor at the door.
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#201 SKELTONICS
6-22-98
Death is quite certain so pull the curtain. Rein in your
lust as we discussed. "Tie on a halo around your
silo. Put grain in the bag and consider a shag rug for
sleeping on when I've gone," said Mumtaz Mahal who gave more
than all
for Jahan's Taj Mahal
at the fourteenth bawl.
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#203 TANKA COUPLET
6-24-98
The glittering silk falls in waves from her shoulder, a great
froth
of red.
The gold sunset grows later.
Roses uncloth their stamen.
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#204 SHORT COUPLET II
6-24-98
Jaipur glows as India's pink town
built upon the desert like a gown,
glittering red and orange, rose, white,
gold walls painted for the Brits with light
mocking, gentle laughter -- magic
lantern of colonial, tragic
misconceptions. Here stood Machivell,
Ram Singh, outwitting British hell.
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#205 MONODY
6-25-98
One year ago today my father died. I see him still, thin as a
reed, mouth open his blue eyes closed. Betty hands me his
ring.
The Blietz people arrive, gently they lift him into
a sack. The last thing I notice are his strong hands. "Goodbye
Papa. I did wear
your emerald for a while. I speak of you
now and again. My hands are strong, my eyes wide open and I
make poems for you -- at times
green as emeralds, thin as
reeds -- and bow to you under your cherry tree flourishing near
where
mother stays among the peach azaleas.
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#234 RANDAIGECHT CHETHARCHUBAID GARIT RECOMARCACH
7-20-98
Glorious shining light notorious shine down upon me
today.
Just
one ray is glorious!
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#244 BOB AND WHEEL
7-30-98
Afloat and free
I wandered through the nights
quite glad to laugh at tea
and foolish little rites
invented from the sea,
afloat and free
I sat upon the shore
quite eager. Lend a plea
in court, repose, adore,
swim immediately
afloat and free
around the kingdom come
as if you were a bee
then sting, quite silent, hum,
then quickly run and flee.
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#253 ABECEDARIUS
8-8-98
Appreciation for our script Begins anew each time I write
Celestial
musings of the Gods Demarcate evolutions from English back to
Summerian. From clay tokens to computers Gyrating round
logographics High concept of sound equal graph.
Invented
by who
knows what tribe Justly intent in absence to Kindle the
presence of
their thought, Lace horizons with their visions. Mantras
welled up
from Sanskrit's sound. Notations carved deep into stone Open
the
sanctuary of Past worlds and civilizations,
Quelling
curiosity's quick Rush on speculation's great need, Sacred,
secular
and divine, To explain sky, sun, star and earth. Urumqui,
furtherest
from all Views of every ocean, yet writes With scripts quite
as
elegantly Xeroxable as any of
Younger lineage since
zero
and
Zen reduced time to trivia.
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#254 IROHA MOJIGUSARI
8-9-98
Alphabetically we may daub beautiful words Asiatic, common
words far
from the ice cold domains far to the north, crunode
East
and
West together, rebuff foreign epithets, and gambling great
masses of
high sounding truth, hieratic declensions,
pi
irridescent,
devotion's Hajj, jocular meanings and quick lock kinetics,
replace
parallel languages fused tightly like gum,
monitered by
no one,
not Han nor Hun nor Jain nor Latino -- orthographically a
gap. People even in new Iraq,
quinquangular plus, must
refer relatively frequently sans summations qualified,
latent, turgid, to redolent Urdu.
Uighur is gone, but
Turkish
rev virtually produced mellow worlds, secret
hieracosphinx, Xerxes' alphabet's sorcery.
Yoga, they
say, means
union's buzz,
Zen's truth, aphonic-phobia.
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#260 SHAKESPEARIAN SONNET
8-18-98
When having lived this long into old age, I miss my keys, I miss
the
lock, I wish for nothing but the promise of bed and
page, and even
page I can do without while I fish for light, a glimmer of
reason,
while I stumble over shoe and chair and spotted clothes
wondering
why the objects of my life still bumble, have never learned
elementary
repose, and my thoughts, like the chaos all about, turn more
and
more to grave good humor's role where just not minding the
bewilderment
helps rout the inroads of time that must take its toll for
things
you thought you still could do decline,
and its quite witless to sit
about and pine.
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#261 ODE III (Keats)
8-19/20/21-98
Within the mountain's stoney quietness you slowly beat out the regime
of Time and space and longing love. You who express the laws of
light and darkness, rhythmn, rhyme, who decrees the quarks and
prairie's gyving shape, you who reign over space, through silence,
both in volcano's birth, fault's wait, Arcady calm, you who are
greatness and yet quite loath to placate man, to let your heart
escape into tenderness, waylay ecstasy,
gyrating violence,
clashings still unheard, who, as Narcisuss, love your breath, the
on going drama, your coming death, endeared by your reflection in
the smell, the tone of blossom and decay, of meet and poignant
leave taking across the specturm of time, of bare and barren earth
will kneel, perhaps, to kiss at last, and nod your ravaged visage,
grieve, acknowledge the disolution of primal bliss when you stand
alone in offal, in fair
disgrace, unaccompanied, treading the
shed where you kept your chattel. O bid adieu, O God, test, now test
soon, Time's yet unwearied waltz, sirening through eternal night and
new flickering moons, eon upon eon seeking love, justification to
live beyond, but enjoyed alone in self worship. Change soon, be
young again, be lonely, longing and grasp above, around, within,
find Shakti, left cloyed, abandoned, without speech without
tongue.
Remark her passion, remark her sacrifice, stand bold
with the stars and become high priest, as once you were, bright in the
triumphing skies humbled, forlorn with love. Be lightly
drest bridegroom to the roar and froth of the sea-shore foam and
phosphorescence. Build the citadel to capture the sunshine of earth's
early morn, explore the possibilities evermore radiantly revealed,
dug from the tell, preserved in amber, awaiting your return.
Loose your tight bound lengthy hair, undo your brede, untwist, unravel
your intricate, overwrought master plan surfeit with flowers, abundant
weed, intertwining, untwining, fruitless thought, with much too
much to mock the pastoral promise, the hopes eaten by bugs, the
waste the disease, the want, the round-robin, the woe, the arrogant
plan, to which thou say'st, against given senses, the witless all:
"Ye know on earth all ye need to know."
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#262 ENVELOPE SONNET I
8-19-98
The ordinary blankness of being transcends mountains, horizons,
creations, so they say. Consciousness was lent us, enfolded in
grey convolutions, synapses, a mind that defends against no
challengers our premier place to rearrange the universe:
re-design, re-nature, re-assemble the pieces, the fine-
tuned,
spider-strong ecological lace. Up the invisible spider-thread
the
inchworms climb. Can they spin? Can they weave? Alone in air it
sways, pathless, fine, the filament of ascent, the Tao
divine,
dubbed by man, sublime. Attached to nothing, undisturbed by
Coriolis
waves,
blind, beyond being, the inchworms go, without dissent.
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#263 ENVELOPE SONNET II
8-21-98
The extraordinary awareness of being finds consolation in
intermittent
sight, transcendence of what, in anguished hope, might be
thought
evidence that completely binds mankind to humankind, fraught
with
compassion fouled by true love, entangled, begrudged,
ensnarled like
birds' grass nests hidden in ancient gnarled trees of which
development
makes fashion statements about the beauty of ugly
houses, about the
richness of barren little lives, the necessites anxiety
rouses like
angry, stinging bees swarming their hives convinced that the red
rose
in the wind blouses,
thrives, jives because it drives, strives and
contrives.
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#288 IAMBIC TETRAMETER QUATRAINS (after Marlowe, Ralegh,
Donne)
9-25-98
DEVAYANI,
Come live with me, and be my love, and we will outside pleasures
move to golden lands and sacred nooks which seem alive, but just in
books.
There will we honor hope and the sun, bright evening
light, maybe what's done in flame like the red of sunset's
ray fending the cold, while fish delay.
Surface world's yet do
play God's wrath though brooks are still beside the path where
birds are mute and silence grim, luteless, you hide behind the
scrim.
Do not from me conceal crimes both of nature's angels,
Gods who loath offenses washed by laws, or sea through which life
swims free, fine,sans fee.
Among the weeds, reprieve re-seeds;
a veil to all its pow'r impedes the opiate, opalescent debt and
treacherous deceit, black as jet.
With breath comes death, eternal
rest; the greeds do die, and are confessed as curious traitors
lying cries for those too shy with guested sighs,
Come be with
me, I am your gate beyond, beneath, by which bleeds fate, all glory
moves before my eye,
my love, my sacred wise one, I.
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#298 GEORGICS
10-12-98
I saw a Nova last night about Andrew Wiles' proof of Fermat's Last
Theorem. It began in smiles
and moved quickly to tears --
Wiles' tears followed aptly by my own, for it celebrated a wily
illumination of the mind, the frequently unutterable joy
-- profoundest joy to see
ideas in air manifest, take shape,
like Bohm's visions of implicate order -- a
metronome
ticking, the analogy of music, lighting the
darkness of an empty room, slowly pushing
away the shadows,
bit by slow bit, single, tiny calculations, one after the other,
piney
scented hints from the natural world, walks along the
river, the path of sunlight and faith, belong
with the giggle
of the childhood dream: he would solve the unsolvable.
Persistently to revolve
for seven secret years the implosion
of his heart's desire, the exploding, almost static
fizz
of concentration, attention, meditation, focus, was
his infinite, sole delight. To shun
even a hint to the world
of his projected goal, sustained him. Working in sunlight, he was
led
through here-to-fore unexplored corridors of mind,
linking and testing, guessing, pondering to find
the Tao.
And he did. Through hesitant steps, narrow misses, bird-walks,
wrong turns, false whispers from sparrow
similarities. Ah
yes, and then one day... You must see the Nova to see bliss, the
unique joy to be that suffuses his human form in his
God-like, solitary, climb to resplendence, a fragile
dike
against the stress of being human, strife
enmeshed, sorrow imbued, struggling with flesh, at once refreshed:
*"The Gods have received from the human mind, the gift
of the power to create...."
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#308 LAMENT
10-27-98
I do understand the rage of God and the wail in the wind, the
cyclone of hopes and desires swept up like fallen
leaves.
The soul breathes in depth and the wild whirl of
the winds and the leaves and the spirals of colors, yellow
crimson and gold, bright green.
No one can cling before
the wind of calamity's swift boon. There will be rage and
there will be deep sparkling peace from the chill --
and
warmth to warn you that ease will come soon, lead you among
bare branches, tall, platinum grass grown brown, great lilies trampled down.
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#310 ELEGY
10-29/31-98
Who'd have thought that, skimming along in the kissing sun in a
blue convertible listening to "Lemon tree very prretty," would lie
in your memory as youth in the Angel's wide blue-skyed City,
epitomized.
As you stand aging on earth less affected by
gravity like an astronaut, losing muscle mass and bone marrow,
filled with a bubbling mirth for man's "achievements," you know
you will soon drift off -- tumbling through black space's depth to
immortality.
Lightly dancing among stars, along lemon-colored
sun beams bodilessness's gift, O Devayani, will be yours, and
comprehensive thoughts about all that was will dissolve, lose
their leaden goalish importance.
But for now, think of the
charm of the dawn at Varanasi, think of the red rising sun, the
drift of the river and song, women in their veils in their saris
pacing against the flow of corpse strewn Ganges, past magical
towers built of human whim.
Stare into the sun's rising beams
fingering their way across the sand, the empty sand, the ancient
wisdom, its flood plain gift from the builders of Varanasi --
Stand with gravity. Jump the lightening
bonds of life.
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#312 DIRGE in Fourteeners
11-5/7-98
The sun reincarnates in the leaves of a rainy fall like a lover's
last embrace scorning death's new arrival.
Blood red is the
Acer palmatum awaiting spring's brawl,
verging round necrophilia, dropping her verdant shawl.
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#334 CORONACH
KOSOVO
4-14/15-99
Haunted by bad thoughts and peculiar memories blood breaking
out in spots on the inside of arms on the outside of
legs bleeding externally and internally
a shimmering
peacock a peahen in pain fearing each feather's mockery
shrouding impregnation bad thoughts peculiar memories
terror.
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#336 EPIC
MY NOVEL
5-29-99/2-3-01
The purple-brown-black-copper-colored leaves of the plum, the scent of
the lilacs... the young girl in white, without shoes, racing
uphill, a couple, her light skirt over tights, strolling... people
standing without nattering impatiently while the frail old
ones -- of which I am one -- slowly-s l o w l y board the
bus, the gnarled mechanic, blue-jeaned from neck to ankle, with
bright red socks in Birkenstocks: these are my world my novel I
cannot stitch them together. Why must I write? Born an American,
I am too restless even on the brink of eternity to just
wander, enjoy. I am compelled to do something.
Therefore,
I write this novel bridging nothing, containing elements, only
elements: zinc, sulphur, copper, plutonium fused together by
an eye, by the ecstasy of being in the sunshine beneath the
roiling drift of the cottonwood's cotton: turbulent stars
against the brilliance.
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Jan Haag
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The above two (2) poems are reposted from By Jan Haag,
http://janhaag.com/PODes334-366.html
The collections By Jan Haag from which the plagiarizers,
NorthStar1007, Susanna, Baie, Baie d'Ange, Frederick, Fred, FTeregul,
and possibly persons using other code names and other pseudonyms
reposted poems include: INSPIRED BY RUMI, THE SEPTEMBER POEMS, BIRDS
MIGRATE AT NIGHT, 26 OF THE 2001 POEMS, and 33 OF THE 2001 POEMS. In
addition NS et al plagiarized LET'S LOOK AT THE OLD FILMS OF INDIA, a
poem represented in four of the By Jan Haag collections: THE DEVAYANI
POEMS, POEMS ABOUT DEATH, ARCHITECTURE AND ARCHAEOLOGY POEMS and THE
JAIPUR SEQUENCE.
The original versions, with their original titles, of each of the
poems plagiarized by NS et al from these collections are posted below
by AlwaysLisa@aol.com with Jan Haag's permission.
Two (2) poems from INSPIRED BY RUMI
THOUGHT
1-9-98
Thought and the time to do it in are rare commodites in the age
of the automobile.
Thought and the time to do it in are
elusive qualities in the age of television
Thought and
the time to do it in are strange abberations in the age of
the propragation
of mass anxiety, misplaced
hysteria induced by speed and the media: coercions
as potent as
thought-police, as the dropping of
hydrogen bombs, the genocide of nations. Free speech in a
land heard
but not acted upon is annihilation of thought
and the time to do it in. On the other hand,
tragedy, subsequent
suffering, anguish of mind, of spirit
can lead to consciousness which can, if we're lucky, lead
to compassion
and a compensatory lack of thought, of
reason -- which drives the world quite mad, creature against
creature,
for all excellent reasons.
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